This one got buried in my inbox for a while, but I finally read it — and I'm so glad I did! It's beautiful, Erin.
It also sounds like an idea that could prompt a short story - what if we *could* "see the dark clouds of pain and trauma that surround so many slumped against buildings, on tarps, in the cold? What if we could see the iridescent pouring that is love out from our chests when we look into each other’s eyes?"
(PS I remember spinning my kids on that infinity sculpture! I love how it gets kids interacting with art.)
Aw thank you SO much for this feedback, Zena! I think this is actually one of my favourites, so nice to hear your response. <3 And wonderful food for thought on a short story. Or perhaps a longer novel (as I start scheming and dreaming about book #2 <3)
This one got buried in my inbox for a while, but I finally read it — and I'm so glad I did! It's beautiful, Erin.
It also sounds like an idea that could prompt a short story - what if we *could* "see the dark clouds of pain and trauma that surround so many slumped against buildings, on tarps, in the cold? What if we could see the iridescent pouring that is love out from our chests when we look into each other’s eyes?"
(PS I remember spinning my kids on that infinity sculpture! I love how it gets kids interacting with art.)
Aw thank you SO much for this feedback, Zena! I think this is actually one of my favourites, so nice to hear your response. <3 And wonderful food for thought on a short story. Or perhaps a longer novel (as I start scheming and dreaming about book #2 <3)
I'm excited to hear you're thinking of writing a novel! I look forward to reading whatever you work on next!